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Thursday, February 2, 2012
"North of Belleville" by James Deahl: and some reflections on Canku
James Deahl is to Ontario (Canada), and to those who've known him, what Alden Nowlan is to Nova Scotia or Jack Hodgins to British Columbia: so unmistakably iconic, so reverentially a part of the literary landscape it's hard after awhile to tell them apart. And, of course, he's been so long the ear into which the dusky Muse of downtown Hamilton has poured her song it's harder to imagine the town without him now that he's moved to Sarnia.
Whether at the Blue Angel Gallery or Artbar--the two spots I've been accustomed to seeing him in the past-- or the many local book launches and even my own Niagara poetry readings, Deahl always is wherever he happens to be. I just can't imagine reading poetry anywhere without him. He seems to be able, almost intuitively and without the usual artifice, to attest to place uniquely in his quintessentially 'people's poetry' style. His latest work North of Belleville (Hidden Brook Press, 2011), with photography, layout and design, by Richard M. Grove, is no less a deeply affectionate homage, in haiku verse, to several distinctive regions in Ontario, some of which I happen to know particularly well, such as Red Hill Valley and McMaster Trail. In this regard I think also of the haibun work of Chris Faiers, the presiding genius of ZenRiver in Marmora, Ontario (on the outskirts of the Canadian Shield).
Haiku and locale (and, of course, season) always work well together; in fact, the congruence in Deahl's work is quite remarkable. Let's look at some Red Hill Valley haiku, particularly the first two:
1) Under storm clouds
the voice of Albion Falls -
cold as ice
2) Deep in King's Forest
the creek lies buried
in yellow leaves
I'd like to suggest that Deahl has assimilated a Japanese artform to hostile shores. Michael Ondaatje once said Canada is not a country for haiku, which may have been true until, of course, Deahl brought them together and revealed some interesting energies of the Canku form (a type of haiku developed by poet Ian Gordon ). In both the impression of beauty lies under a sort of cover that is more menacing than nutritive. I'd qualify Ondaatje's statement by saying it isn't haiku so much as metaphor that doesn't belong. Whatever gives shelter in the Canadian literary psyche is always literally condemned to appear surly and ill-mannered: a creature of weather and topography (like most Canadians). Poetic voice appears either frozen or muffled altogether and yet therein lies its beauty and strength as an art form. To know the poem is to know the place.
I've been to both Albion Falls and King's Forest many times, particularly in my childhood. Albion's forbidding precipice gives off precisely that cold-as-ice chill like the breath in winter while scarcely any of a once regal expanse of pine, now that it's been sheared to make room for an expressway, can hide the King's winding brook. A few leaves will easily cover it. Deahl's haiku leave the "chill" and "fragility" of local landscapes intact and yet present them, at the same time, as startlingly revelatory. It's an almost comical incongruity good Canadian haiku must register. On the surface all's haiku form; however, churning and twisting beneath the surface is the real poem.
James Deahl celebrates place since, perhaps, the place has already known him, as Marmora has always waited for Chris Faiers. Haiku in Canada will be seen as a parody of Wordsworthian nature mongering only if you've been used to thinking in those silly Wordsworthian terms already. Canada's only laughably suitable for Lake District verses. Deahl's made sure to change the language of it forever. Water falls in winter don't just freeze but exude their own cold stinky metallic breath and forests stationed beside a major roadway do look like industrial parks, burying more than they reveal. The celebrated 'break' kireji of classical haiku is nowhere better felt than in a Forest's busted guts. I really can't help but see all that in six short lines though, of course, Deahl's only given an initiatory language of things "cold" and "buried". Again, to know the poem is to know the place, and now the poet.
I'd like to thank James Deahl for the gift of North of Belleville and, above all, for an opportunity to take another look deep into the most incomprehensible and intactile of artforms: the Canadian haiku. How grateful we should be for the master poets who've done nothing but look.
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I'm struck by your observation that "it isn't haiku so much as metaphor that seems out of place." I happen to be teaching Bachelard's The Poetics of Space, and in it he remarks, "[A] metaphor should be no more than an accident of expression, [...] it is dangerous to make a thought of it. A metaphor is a false image, since it does not possess the direct virtue of an image formed in spoken revery." I'm not sure I agree with B., but his critique makes sense when you consider Deahl's line "cold as ice"—a metaphor, of course, and certainly timeworn. And yet—it feels to me as if the "false image" of the metaphor, its failure to "make it new," is not a weakness but an accurate response to the "forbidding" Albion Falls: the writer's voice shrinks back into threadbare metaphor at the sound of the Falls' voice. This may simply be a lot of "reading into" on my part, but I can't think how to explain the rightness of that third line otherwise.
In any case, thanks for introducing James Deahl to me, Conrad. I'm adding North of Belleville on my list....
Joseph,
I actually agree with you and Bachelard both: metaphor, esp. the good ones, ought almost to trip over itself, a literariness in spite of itself. That way you can be sure you've got something fresh, uniquely different. Canada's best literary productions are at their best when they do excell almost by happenstance.
Deahl's "cold as ice" can't be appreciated until you've peered into the mouth of Albion Falls, a steep yawning semi-arc of a waterfall that looks like the entrance to the 'inferno',a cold hell. And it smells like hell, too.
Similarly for King's Forest, half of which's been clipped to make room for a goddamm expressway that actually floods after every substantial rainfall. To mention leaves covering what's left of its once proud stream is to reveal only one-third of its poetic punch. And I believe Deahl understands that.
Good luck with the Bachelard teaching: as you know, he's one of my literary heroes (and mainstays)
http://notesandqueries.ca/a-whiff-of-the-monster/
Of interest.
Thanks for the link, Anonymous.
Will follow Notes and Queries with interest
one of the first haiga that South X Southeast
published
was a drawing of (my character) MU
with the spit:
What's
a
metaphor ?
(actually, the FIRST haiga that they (Steve Addiss and (I think his name is) Josh Hockinstien (pardon the mis-spelling) was the one I made as a post card
that I just sent off to Con:
far
away
hearing
woosh / woosh
;morning sun
as for consciously using metaphor
seems to me un-nesesary as being
a trick/gimmick learned/prescribed and at best
corny/hakneed ?
check-out Kandinsky's
1935 reply to Zervos' declaration in his Cahiers d'Art
mag....
you can change "painting/art" to "writing/poetry"
&
"clue" me as to which of the above in my 'off the wall' comment is
metaphor ( or just strong ice-cold black coffee ?
ACTUALLY
here is link to that first haiga that S X Southeast published it was "out of" / became part of SHRIKE
http://edbaker.maikosoft.com/shrike/26.html
which was "out of" BOTH my (external) observations
&
my (internal) reality/ies
seems to me
that
too much thinking/scholarship/prescription-ings
jus
ain't conducive to anything along
the lines of
creating any thing out of one's OWN ...
spirit ?
it is also a great relief to have limited to nearly non my
blogs visitings/commentatingsings...
my blood pressure has dropped 35 points since reducing what's it called... de:constructing
all of the ego/redundant/useless "information' out there
now?
at plus 70 yard old I ask (seriously):
any boddhi wanna ball a poet ?
seems to me
that
"too much thinking/scholarship/prescription-ings
jus
ain't conducive to anything along
the lines of
creating any thing out of one's OWN ...
spirit ?"
Ed,
this is a masterpiece of minimalist writing!And it's as natural to you as talking.
I should be so fluent at 70.
sorry I put those quotes in there
as
I
saids it;
to sa no
thing
of the
punkchewation
&/or (the)
spelling?
OH
I see
(said the blind man)
YOU put the quotes in....
which
shld have been pre- the seems to me ...;
now
thanks for reminding me
Ron promised he was gonna write an essay on "minimalist" poetry long-about-now...
I going over to check that out....
see if he re;hashes what has been said/written add gnaughsheummmmmm !
problem w these labels / definitivities
they require memorization by rote and only lead one into for
post-graduate Credential BS degrees of
platidudinal hockus-poking & Advanced Mumbo Jumbo ...
as for being lucid after age 70 ?
I figure
that
since I dropped out between 1975 and 1998
I got (maybe) gawd willing and the creek don't rise
a bonus of ,say, 25 years !
&
if The Creek does rise.....I'll jus move onto
higher ground....
with what's-her-name
A comment by Tom Clark who was unable to get into my blog post:
Conrad,
Interesting and convincing. Esp.:
1) Under storm clouds
the voice of Albion Falls -
cold as ice
That one recalls Keats's line about "feeling it on the pulse" (as a poetic requirement).
Must also say I love this line of yours:
"... the ear into which the dusky Muse of downtown Hamilton has poured her song..."
As it seems compulsory for bloggers to blurt autobiographical revelations, I will share that my first visit to Hamilton, Ontario came in the same month Andy Williams' version of Canadian Sunset hit the charts. Ah the golden glow of the memory of one's first brave Canadian sunset, glimpsed from the back seat of an iron tank made in Detroit!
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