The writer twists language, makes it vibrate, seizes hold of it, and rends it in order to wrest the percept from perceptions, the affect from affections, the sensation from opinion—in view, one hopes, of that still-missing people (Deleuze and Guattari cited in Jacques Rancière's The Emancipated Spectator)
Recently received, 5 July 2010, by air mail from Schenectady, NY a pwoermd-poem (perhaps the first ever at this address!)by minimalist poet Geof Huth (dbqp qbdp pdqb bqpd), that enjoins me, first of all, to "silentlisten". Formalities forsworn, he writes:
Conrad,
silentlisten
hardest
(most studiously)
at the lack of
As if he knew me! I open and read, & the poem comes closing in, unrelenting in the way it enforces a "silentlisten" solemnity: to the overstudious (like me) who like to write and read aloud, it's quite a wake-up call. I think Huth's also got me wondering if it's a full suite he's given me here or a collection of doors. Thought rhythms that break against anything as porous as the human ear are bound to seem uneventful at times, but if they derive from the smallest intelligible one-word poems out there: the pwoermd, they can have a quite remarkable effect on both ear & the artistic sensibility. The pwoermd, and anything arising out of it (like a complete poem) revels in a syntax coked with constant "fusions", "fissions" (
Grumman's principles of minimalist formation) of letters, words, and visuals. Every verse a crashing sense and I'm being asked in his letter to catch a wave, for once.
Silent stresses of the artist's rickety easel.
Or the true 'elided' disaster in every news article I've ever read.
The abruptness of a line like "at the lack of" that's still lyric-friendly, still alliterative & graceful can be instructive as well, introducing a dissonance still capable of language. The pwoermd-poem honors a speaking voice of sorts (contrary to one Language misconception):
yet a voice
is more
than
ruined words
or less
trill treble trillium
in a wooded shade
I find, instead of narrative bedrock, a series of micro-rhythms scattered throughout Huth's pwoermd-poem. The voice, freed from granitic intentions, suddenly feels lighter and surer of its materials, since there's no compelled adoration of the usual form & function rule. Lines and stanzas cannot be parsed, coupled or yoked to a soldering narrative merely (as per a formalist reading): here the poem as a whole (the only sense in which it coheres) seems to comprise of an exploitable source of future pwoermd-formations. That is its primary syntactical mandate. A pwoermd poetry (and poetics) is based on "ruined words or less"but by "ruined" Huth means to restore them, at the same time, to what words have always been designed to do: viz. splice, dice and recoil from the familiar as often as possible. Here's a poetry inseparable from the one-word 'things' (words, letters, typographical shorthands) they essentially are.
As if the pwoermd bandit's stolen standard lineation and left us with a radically compressed, "infra-verbal" (Grumman) network. A poem of isolable filaments as delicate as the spaces they shape. Could not "trill treble" become "tritreble' by pulling free one filament, collapsing space to make room for letter fusion? A collapsing not a switching per se since language seems to work by a "holey space" (Deleuze) matrix. A foamy order of pwoermd formation comprising of easily elided (or "fused", "fissured", etc.) parts by whose openings alone any pwoermd-grid can be known. In the same way as the rickety easel is a segue to van Gogh's boots and flowers. A list of traditional poetics things, to be recharged and refitted for pwoermd work, is now made possible, Huth giving us "treeroot" as if to show the way (& there'll be more):
treeroot rising
(wave, muscle)
from the earth
motionless but moving
still
the muteness of stones
gravel spread
for traction among
grass and plantain
rock in place
(of loonsong
and moonless
that it might be
no rose
but rose before
me a rose
before me
and then
me
A list made possible by the initial impetus of the lyricist's recoverable voice: almost a "treeroot" rising like a wave or muscle, the silent and inexorable pressure, and not the real "tree root", behind every real organic growth. Perhaps the "no rose/but rose before" verse is inclining towards (but really eclipsing) a traditional poetics with standard "rose" symbolism at its service. Perhaps the place for talking about things that grow lies somewhere between language and a full-blown poem. Between "earth" and "the muteness of stones". Who knows?
But a verse integrity is possible in which "me arose" or "mea rose" ( by Grumman's "fissional" principle of minimalist creation) can be offered as easily interchangeable lines, in case you're tempted to try interpreting the whole "me a rose/before me" verse that follows as a principle of the priority of poetic perceiver over perceived. Senses are prioritized on the basis of a more fluid spatial "laxonomy". Words, letters and even the more intractable infra-verbal spaces where pwoermd life doesn't seem possible (if there are any) are all "poetential" areas of growth. The possibility of line (and sense) mutation does, though, seem as wispy as a filament & soluble as "holey space" but a list of the "poetential" keeps growing, now envisaged not so much as "muscle" as "wave" action.
wave from wave
each wave carries or
moves through multiple
smaller waves water
finding what shape
it must and the loon
'svoice a wavering
two-tone in
black and white
a motor can grumble but not groan
passionless fruit
the
flag
wave
but not tire
trackless
The wave that changes into "the loon/'svoice", the "passionless fruit" of a groaning motor and the wave's (like the flag's) "trackless" identity—what are these, really? I am not the dispossessed reader we're expected to be so I'll propose some pwoermd commentary, happy to engage in a collective practice of seeing the quintessential pwoermd in the poem Huth has sent, "finding what shape it must" (Similar perhaps to the way Plato encouraged audiences not to be passive viewers of the play but its
choros, vigorous participants in the dance (Jacques Rancière)).
To begin with, the essence of flag wave is its "flagth"', a figure reducible to sound and image. A figure of breath and breadth. And to find the sense in which flag or wave can be trackless (perhaps the poem's most ambiguous figure), I'll offer a Grumman-type arithmetical poem, made of clearly defined parts, in which "the/flag/wave/but not tire/trackless" line is converted into a "not tire>trackless=flag or wave" replacement rule, where "wave" or "flag" means any arbitrarily selected poetical object. Say what you like about foamy universes, there are always ways to keep the things inside them held in playful tensions til other sound, lexical & logical coordinates replace them. Suspensions without resolution. Adding "th" to the end of "flag", for instance, is a way to show that it's neither a hidden poem (intended to be written) nor a language in which to discuss & write the poem. "Flagth" is its own irreducible thing: one product of an endlessly reconfigurable grid of freely given and shared letters, sounds & visuals.
less than perception
the eyelist
and (skewed) sees
anew
the streambed
the lawnbank
the bushsheath
the hemlocksun
the floweflowers
Yes, poetry as"less than perception". It is, as Rancière's said in regards to theatre, "the third thing that is owned by no one, whose meaning is owned by no one, but which subsists between them, excluding any uniform transmission, any identity of cause and effect." (
The Emancipated Spectator 15). Here's an "eyelist" of poetically interesting "skewed" vision, where a simple negation of space draws together normally separable materials (like "stream" & "bed", "flower" & "flowers") but without seeming random, wilful: where the "list" is inseparable from the "eye". Not an uncoupling, of course, but a poetic practice or energy dedicated to the acquisition of "these indelible foods/before me...gathered into salad".
th'eating
brea'thing
unth'reat'ning
sky
blue skies
her blue skies
her two blue skies
looking down on me
silistently
she moves
thoroughly you
The "communitarian" impulse of Huth is now becoming evident, poet wanting nothing more than to eliminate contaminants of a too interested 'academic' reading that's already commoditized much of contemporary poetry, and restore to it something of its essential "th'eating", "brea'thing" nature. The letter I received was a call for literary filiation & an invitation to join in the
choros of artistic life. Celebrate a wonderfully porous world mirrored in language (and vice-versa) where "blue skies" can look down on us both, "silistently" and "thoroughly".
* I'd like to acknowledge my indebtedness (if it isn't already obvious) to the writings of French philosopher, critic and theorist Jacques Rancière, the discovery of whose writings has lately amounted to a re-discovery of self.