Saturday, March 5, 2011

"A lakeshore dig"

A poem inspired by the recent discovery of signs of early aboriginal or early 19th century Euro-Canadian settlements along a stretch of Lake Ontario not far from where I live.





A few sparrow twigs down shore
 & to the woods
(ensconced there in Sioux lookouts,
 or nearer)

The forage has long since melted,
  and cattle, elk
 are a living animal aura at best,
  today—

a site's been dug, but not exactly a
  maize allotment
with arrows grinding into the ore.
  god's a borer!

Spring's a time for La Salle's prow
  seen from here
and ridges played out and foamy,
  on rainy days

Few scalding leaves & some ol' wet
  Iroquois crud,
falling slowly off the trowel,
  clay-like

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wonderful! I especially love "some ol' wet / Iroquois crud, / falling slowly off the trowel." The given moment and the given history enacted in words. Absolutely luminous...

Conrad DiDiodato said...

I thank you, good sir!

Actually, "trowel" is a bit of a poetic conceit: the workers at the actual dig site are passing artifacts through a big net screen or sieve. You can see it in the linked article

How to convert that into poetry requires more skill than I possess.

Anonymous said...

nice piece
&going in-to the dig of it as you do it s an archeology,
eh?

try his sat march 17 "letter" in Mayan Letters

then "pick it up" in his letter dated sunday april 1

"...What continues to hold me, is, the tremendous levy on all objects as they present themselves to human sense, in the glyph-world. And the proportion, the distribution of weight given same parts of all, seems, exceptionally, distributed & accurate, that is,that

sun
moon
venus
other constellations & zodiac

snakes
ticks
vultures

jaguar
owl

frog

feathers

peyote

water-lily

(etc)"


and

Olson STILL b-l-o-w-s me away

"good" moves in your piece ...

keep your powder dry and rely on them chickens pecking in the dirt ... for "stones"


K.

Conrad DiDiodato said...

Thanks, K

Olson is the paleopoet of all times, isn't he? He wanted language roots (for poetry) to go all the way back to the "snakes/ticks/vultures".

Here's to STONE GIRL!