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Sunday, October 31, 2010
"Soffits and eaves". A late autumn poem
In a pure high turret
burning crimson-patch
—the pine on high!—
& the soffits and eaves
clogged with leaves
The niftiest part of moon's
not so much a croissant
as cute flake on a lip!
And the gash of autumn, too
(a type of glissando, dear)
like a leaf edge bleeding
into sight as the child goes
and cool sprinkle of dust
on a cool urban stream—
the light & kick of water
It's part of a vital fall:
final finishing sunflower
(before the spill)
acorn mashed under foot,
shades of flighty jaytail—
just when you thought
dews sop up too much sun
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3 comments:
"Soffit and eaves" so suits this shift of the seasons, Conrad. Beautiful work.
Thanks, Penn
A sign advertising repairs to "soffit and eaves" caught my eye as I was running a week or so ago, and the poem just seemed to write itself.
Sophistry ease: soft, fit and ease.
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