Sunday, October 31, 2010

"Soffits and eaves". A late autumn poem








In a pure high turret
burning crimson-patch

—the pine on high!—

& the soffits and eaves
clogged with leaves

The niftiest part of moon's
not so much a croissant

as cute flake on a lip!
And the gash of autumn, too

(a type of glissando, dear)

like a leaf edge bleeding
into sight as the child goes

and cool sprinkle of dust
on a cool urban stream—

the light & kick of water
It's part of a vital fall:

final finishing sunflower
(before the spill)

acorn mashed under foot,
shades of flighty jaytail—

just when you thought
dews sop up too much sun

3 comments:

Penn Kemp said...

"Soffit and eaves" so suits this shift of the seasons, Conrad. Beautiful work.

Conrad DiDiodato said...

Thanks, Penn

A sign advertising repairs to "soffit and eaves" caught my eye as I was running a week or so ago, and the poem just seemed to write itself.

Penn Kemp said...

Sophistry ease: soft, fit and ease.