Thursday, July 29, 2010

The poetry of John Martone: & some reflections on community



you can see
the broken stones

around this garden
from outer space (from braincase)
        
          you're just
          an or
ganelle

golgi
body

mito
chon
drion

mr
no name (from ksana)

I have lately spent much time in my blog on the minimalist & visual poetries of American poets, even though 'Word-Dreamer' was created to address primarily Canadian issues in contemporary poetry. Am I losing focus?  Have I lost the terminus ad quem? The literary scene at home does get my attention but (sigh) only sporadically, & only when I'm not distracted by what's appeared to me to be a much more vibrant, culturally significant American discussion. I've found most Canadian bloggers to be standoffish, territorial & generally unreceptive to tough discussion of their works and viewpoints: sometimes willing to exchange ideas on criticism, provincial disparities and arts funding but mostly interested (I find) in promoting a dominant Canadian status quo. And I've sometimes reflected here on the reasons why.

How different things are stateside! The American poets I've met espouse an openness to ideas and intellectual fair-mindedness, a generosity and unstinting commitment to literary work I find admirable. How do I know? To begin with, I sometimes get copies of inventive & imaginative work, always generously given, and with no other end in view than to share & create a literary community of poet-friends. Ed Baker and Geof Huth are two such contributors to this growing transborder friendship. And  now from poet John Martone comes a collection of haiku and minimalist poetry in the form of ksana (published in Jim Kacian's Red Moon Press in 2009) and other "small books and ephemera" which I will look at shortly.

To judge, and appreciate, the quality of work one must then belong to a community, or be prepared to espouse a version of one. And John Martone recently has done that. Poet, publisher and conceptual artist, he's given to a grateful reader interesting entryways into a world, a buddhistic cosmos actually and insightful intersections with Vedic cosmology, language & minimalist sensibility. Here are also artisanal productions (in the spirit of Cid Corman & Ed Baker) attuned to tradition and mindful of the conditions of creativity itself: never daring to conceptualize fake divides between language & poetry—the two always seen as working at cross purposes these days—and make a monstrosity of vital poetic matter. Here's also work that's respectful of real readers who are capable of building their own bridges to distant authors and styles.

 As I've said, I've recently received a gift of poetry from John Martone: one main recently published text ksana, with a collection of smaller works, variously named & designed. The title ksana, Sanskrit for extreme swiftness (as in the time it takes a "Chinese blade" to pass through a single silk thread), is a declaration of origins and poetic style. The grateful reader ponders on work that's felt to be, in one sense, as congenial as "pebble in palm" ( ksana 13) or, in another, as majestic as "cliff in hand" (14). It's remarkable that there's no more nor less in the pebble than in the cliff:  both are poetic objects given equally in a moment of  brilliant intuitiveness, energy-bearing and as highly charged as a charm or amulet. As Martone himself describes the poetic object, in an online article entitled "The NEOLITHIC (re)turn in poetry",
A Poem is first of all an amulet, an OBJECT bearing energy (c.f. the objectivist poem as object and Olson's poem as "at every point a high-energy discharge"). The poem is first of all a charm, relic, medicine, compass, key. See, too, the ORACLE BONES of Shang dynasty China, scapulamancy as practiced even today by arctic peoples, and Marija Gimbutas’ The Living Goddesses. We are not talking about the poem sitting on a page like a jewel in a ring but the two inseparable, Eshleman’s THE ONE ART given its place. In this context, to “reproduce” (i.e. publish) a poem widely is to pass on as little of it as the “reproduction” of a painting or sculpture. We would speak instead of instances of a poem – think of the poet as writing down the poem again and again.

To read  is to engage always in a playful shifting between 'abodes' (topoi) that don't ever clash: rather they complement each other, providing always for that quick clean cut to the poem's center. Yes, a poem's center and the closure of poetic space where things offer portals to shared insight. How marvelously the boy is indistinguishable from his gloves in the absence of illusory earthly dimensions (like real gloves), trees from an alphabet, room from diorama & lichens and stones from the house:

                           a boy
                           snow in
                           his gloves

                                                                   these fallen trees
                                                                   an alphabet


      his room yes
      shoebox
      diorama



                                                                   acorn caps
                                                                   lichen stems
                                                                   fossil stones—
                                                                   houseful soon
                                                                   then no wall

Far from not seeing the same things and writing wildly disparate visions, the reader senses that one mind's at work always, & that viewing is participatory and even joyful, and that the poet has consciously adapted skill to vision. One equal vision in which Martone, never the cavalier theorist of difference & diffidence, the namer of schools, lets language work co-materially with poetic objects & sometimes the form of expression itself. Whether it be a new moon, a slitted sheet folded into a tiny 2.5" by 3.5" six-page booklet or a book itself a bookmark, a book converted to booklet; or the equally small pocket-size texts bye now, geometry & [Crassula ovata], each bound with delicate handmade papier-mâché covers, artifacts to be held reverentially in the hands—whatever the materials or form of expression, it's poetry designed to bring readers together into community and tradition. Never exilic and dispersed as are the fragments of contemporary poetry, Martone's pieces offer shareable secrets (as poet says, "you're part of this secret", ksana 48) & instruct by direct showing:

keeping a jade plant
all winter
that's my secret ([Crassula ovata])

blue sky
the first
pet (bye now)

log—
hollow

long time
now

down
to this

empty
skin ( geometry)

Verses also appear to be models suitable for imitation,with  place names and circumstances serving as significant literary occasions. The haiku tradition is being reverenced and legitimized as a viable contemporary art form: as who couldn't see the student's homage to Basso in, "green tree-frog/in bathroom sink/my dream" (ksana 63). Poetry offered as a kind of  instruction to the uninitiated such as to "make  yr/bowl/of clay//& have no metal" (from ksana, 47), or sketch the buddha in "one/syca/more's//highest/limbs" (ksana 47)  And expecting to find Martone stick close to form wouldn't be an unreasonable expectation since the reader also notes the presence throughout of  kireji (the break in verse that leads to insight) and kigo (the presence of obligatory season, plant, & animal names), structural principles that in a master's hand result in sharp seasonal & landscape vignettes that can stun the attentive into pure mindfulness:

fall's turned
    wild mint spikes
        white (ksana 37)

this lichen's a snowflake (ksana 45)

winter firefly-
  chip of
    yellow glass (ksana 57)

white bead
youll be
june bug ( from a shambles)

my wool
watch cop

on an
empty

flower
pot
    spring! (from braincase)

just let year's first mosquito take me (ksana 72)

it's spring all muddy w you turtle (ksana 72)

But formal conditions, too firmly locked in classical genre, won't ever restrict the poet's view here : everywhere the rhythms seem to jump into motion like the "spring's first water strider's drifting" (ksana 72) & "pea-/tenril-/sense" (ksana 187), or suddenly halt along riversides at a makeshift camp ground as in "riverside/you could camp/there's a bedframe" (ksana 73) Or consider the somber end-stop of arrested movement in death: particularly the "roly/poly//[that]rolls from dead//turtle's head portal" (ksana 73) Words and objects don't drift apart nor do rhythms, offered up in sound & meter, fail to gauge the course (or cycles) of natural events: none of the studied detachment (as in post-avant poetries)  from real lives & histories. "try hearing gods in a roadside ditch" (ksana 198).

As a contemporary poet Martone also explores the textuality of the page. In ksana the poet uses space creatively, interweaving verticals & horizontals that point towards interesting thematic cross links, as well as hyphenated and abbreviated constructions, & even the odd Chinese character:

                                                                     brick wall
                                                                            out of the wind
                                        red-                                     weeping cherry

                                        buds

                                        make

                                        a                                    7 pair
                                                                              dutchman's
                                        pur                                 breeches

                                        ple                                 on
                                                                              their
                                        mist
                                                                              flag
                                                                              pole (ksana 81)

algae
  cd be
      bullfrong (ksana 82)

jack in his pulpit
    by #3
          stepping stone (ksana 83)

shell, attentive to the integrity of page space, displays a kind of principle of repetition in which 'peony' sometimes begins, sometimes ends a verse: the effect is that of a cascading waterfall with plant caught somewhere in its clear basin (See also ksana 129, 136, 158, 178 & 199):

peonies—
                 already
                             too late

peony
                a huge eye
                               opens

...

more ants
                than petals
                                  peony

a habilis
              cranium
                                 peony

braincase is another work that displays an interesting economy of space, empty pages randomly alternating with full, and a full page sometimes comprising of only a single line. As the largest of the works it's surprisingly also the sparsest in terms of a word-to-page ratio. So the traditionalist can also be experimentalist: the two never seem at loggerheads for the reader engaged in the "pleasures of the text".

The node section of ksana, for example, is a particularly artful adaptation of Vedic classicism to a  'node' concept that's used in Internet discourse to mean information seen as points of interconnection among computer networks: in other words, here Martone's meshed, to great effect, "nodes of indra's net" with a more contemporary feel for the discreteness or ambiguities, perhaps, of the human condition itself. A god of cosmology, of the elements and battle who also provides terms of reference for cosmic tensions and life processes in postmodern life:  "yes  youre/an/attic/room/astro/naut" (134), "10/fallen/trees//&/you/were first" (135) and "sparrows all of us in our winter padding" (137). A wonderful interchange of classical and contemporary sensibilities that never tries to pass itself off as just pure experimentalism.

 In general, Martone's is a poetry aesthetically pleasing to the eye and suited to the reading mind's own call for alternating lexical and syntactical patterns Even Sanskrit and English verses can be vertically aligned on the page (as in ksana 92) and remain (as all of his poetry is) focused on shared vision. "my garden buddha  hasnt moved all winter" (ksana 163) Since the poet's put the power of verse back into the  garden buddha", the reader recognizes all the elements of that central trope ("place"), such as the accompanying "spreading ashes" "gloves", and "arching back" (163-64), as poetic processes intimately gathered in a single haiku-like effect. I'd venture to say almost every piece in ksana is a reestablishment of the assimilation of life-processes to a unified dharmic insight: and Martone the poet a buddha-figure who writes always "under the name of an ordinary fool".

Turkey buzzards, jade plant, shells, moons, refracted light & perhaps even the "book itself" are not just titles & metaphors in the poetry of John Martone—they're things to engage the attentive mind. And what's moved Martone to extend to me (as Baker & Huth have done before) the gift of poetry is the same thing that's moved the poet himself to write: a sense of the importance of community & of language's necessity to free things from the illusoriness of limitations, artifactual & linguistic mainly. And for that I'm extremely grateful.

Thursday, July 22, 2010

"Who Dat" by J.Cole (uncensored version): and Homeric tradition in rap



There is no end, but addition: the trailing
Consequence of further days and hours,
While emotion takes to itself the emotionless
Years of living among the breakage
Of what was believed in as the most reliable -
And therefore the fittest for renunciation
                                ( T.S.Eliot, "The Dry Salvages)

I've always believed rap was Homeric, and not just by design: it seems as attuned to life's rhythms (I'd prefer to say 'arhythmics'), tensions and playful incongruities as anything you'll get in the Iliad. I've only looked at a few rap songs but the few I have, (& judging as well by the almost unanimous acceptance of hip hop music among the young), have led me to believe that rap means to be a true contemporary poetry. Yes, rap as the true heir to classical oral-based narrative: with Tupac Shakur perhaps its greatest poet-figure. He was the rhapsode of his age: the poet performer in a songmaking tradition that goes all the way back to antiquity. (The poet laureate of Edmonton, Alberta is hip hop artist Roland Pemberton, (a.k.a. Cadence Weapon.  I'm surprised there aren't more.) I wish someone would look seriously at the idea of Homeric code in contemporary hip hop music. I think the ancient Greek ideal of thumos (meaning "passion", "spiritedness" or an "innate drive for recognition") would be serviceable here.

J.Cole's "Who Dat", despite the skillful  choreography & theatre, song and setting, looks as if it stumbles through every imaginable inner-city nightmare, every stereotype of race and politics. This is its design. Though offering disparate (ludicrously incongruous) parts there is a whole story that emerges:  integration out of the seemingly disintegrating structures.The rap he's inherited from Tupac and early hip hop upholds a recognizable pattern of  tradition through variety: and the young artist is faithful to that lineage. The songer-performer is the unaccommodated rapster (a type of culture hero), who wanders listlessly into and out of his own narrative, following the same abandoned tracks; and the message, conveyed in the usual language, (Fayetteville) "southside" landscapes & violent backdrops of crowds & exploding cars, is really a weave of all the many incongruous (purposely misplaced) mini 'epics' along the way. It's his own unique take on the rap standard.

Lyrics, hands & gestures jab & strike at the heart of enforced 'codes' of middle-class life: urban, media and educational. Abandoned loading docks, strips of dirty forests and impressionable youth glued to multimeda foreground J.Cole's rap, and not the other way around.The video enforces the ludicrousness of the unenforceable—assimilation of inner-city youth in general, & gang youth in particular, to mainstream life— through a series of always very plausible images of "the breakage" in mainstream America: which is rap's true standard. He sets his rhythms, message and landscape against the norm (standard English, high school ethos and role-modelling) For lock-step conformity he gives meandering lyrics (parody of peripatetics), with cheer leaders, high school bands and growing mobs. Fires set here are not bonfires on the beach:  mostly self-igniting, fueled by exploding cars & the gas spills under the rapper's feet. They're signs to remember a story & landscape by: pyrotechnics in the service of a mnemotechnics.

Interestingly enough,  the online Urban Dictionary gives the expression "Who dat" as a derogatory reference to the once unpopularity of the New Orleans Saints football team: "Who dat said dey gonna beat dem saints. "Who dat" (ebonics for "Who is that?" ) is used here in J.Cole's video as perhaps a similar interrogation of fake tradition (even ebonics-based), or even a substitute inner-city history from which the rest of America's been excluded. Realities of gang culture, & the conditions that underlie them, cannot be separated from their representations in rap: to try to separate them (even in discussion) would be as absurd as the mainstream images of pom- poms, marching bands & role-modelling actually seen in J.Cole's video.

Did the young rap artist J.Cole purposefully foresee (and work into his video) the strange dialectics of the arhythmics of art & life: remixing the standard  violence of visuals & signs, haunting sonorousness of music, to form his variation on the rapper "thug life" tradition? I doubt he consciously did though he's aware (I'm sure) of the essential drama of dance, youth and  fires in any true contemporary poetry, one that clearly derives from Homeric epic and story-telling.

Sunday, July 18, 2010

Dancing at Auschwitz: reflections on art's "intolerable image"




My reading of philosopher & art theorist Jacques Rancière lately has suggested some new inroads into poetry, some aspects of his post-critical thought on contemporary art seeming even to dovetail nicely with an examination of the minimalist ("pwoermd) poetry of Geof Huth. But it's done more than that. I've just read  Rancière's "The Intolerable Image" chapter of his The Emancipated Spectator, where he brilliantly critiques artistic representations of the most horrible realities imaginable, looking specifically at Oliviero Toscani's posters of anorexic models and Martha Rosler's 60s Vietnam War photographs,  the media depictions of Auschwitz, the Rwandan & Cambodian genocides, and  Kevin Carter's Pulitzer-winning "vulture stalking a dying child". He questions whether the intolerability of the image can form part of critical art, one where montage, collage and détournement techniques are understood as artistic channels for social & political critique. Do these venerable critical art forms run aground here?                                       

He wonders, in particular, if content of this kind can be separated from image, the former normally regarded as the true reality behind the image and the impetus for protest against the injustices & inhumanities that graphic representations disclose. Environmental activists oftentimes exploit the social activist potential of imagery. Rancière's own view is that the gap between picture and content's been closed: far from stirring the indignant viewer to action (or to thoughts of it), the image as picture, painting or poem reveals a tension at the heart of viewing itself. And if the question of the nature of the artistic representation in general leads to that of the nature of the intolerable in particular, the lines between spectator and object seem to have been blurred beyond recognition. It's not clear what Carter's image of a dying girl in Sudan can be: a political (a "call to arms") or its own unique thing as art, something to be passively viewed & registered aesthetically. Rancière refers to this inner-tension in art as "the dialectic inherent in the political montage of images." A discussion too complex to pursue here.

                                              Kevin Carter's "vulture stalking child"

My reading of Rancière also happened lately to have coincided with what I consider to be another example of  "intolerability of the image": namely, a recent YouTube video of an eighty-nine year old holocaust survivor Adolek Kohn who's seen dancing with his family to disco music (the song "I Will Survive") at the Auschwitz site where he was himself interned. Here's a video compilation of disco music & damce staged against boxcars, entrances and crematoria. The image certainly looks grotesquely inconsonant with reality (the Shoah). It counter-poses (a favorite verb of Rancière's) to the image of unimaginable suffering that of dance and joyful celebration of life. As he says, "We came from the ashes and now we dance."

Auschwitz is emblematic of this "inner tension" in art. But the viewer asks how the video can be articulated as art and even dared to be displayed to the public while, at the same time, feeling its appeal as one form of contemporary expression, almost on a par with any other. It's troubling that here "image" (joyful celebration) and "content" (mass extermination) can't mercifully collapse in on themselves, and strike the video out of our artistic consciousness.The fact that they can't, of course, is deeply problematical. Declaring the image itself to be unrepresentable in this way is to run the risk of adopting a too 'uncritical' position in regards to art in general. It's as though the intolerable content (anorexic model, vulture stalking dying girl, holocaust survivor dancing at Auschwitz) were something to be suspended in critical space, just one type of 'image' (of viewing) among a whole array of others.

 Kohn's daughter Jane Korman, the producer of the video, said her purpose was to "make some artwork that would waken people and make them think again about this past". She could have cited Roberto Benigni's portrayal in movie La Vita Bella or Claude Lanzmann's Shoah as similar types of artwork. Originally displayed in an Australian art gallery, her image of the intolerable is now offered as a legacy to a YouTube and MuchMusic generation who've been normally too "numbed", "desensitized" to the Holocaust event. Korman gives a more appealing  inverted 'image' of the hopelessness and despair that's been historically associated with Auschwitz: the unimaginable softened (more delicately aestheticized) for the young as song & dance. Otherwise "who would bring their grandchildren here?" asks Kohn.

Without holocaust survivor himself present, the dance video would be rightly condemned as a form of Holocaust-denial or -denigration and yet a very uncomfortable sort of acquiescence in the suitability of artistic form, promoted by a holocaust survivor himself, can be the effect of seeing Korman's video. What should be a clash of irreconcilable opposites in artwork doesn't here necessarily result in a single efficacious point of unbearable horror (perhaps the same that had led to criticism of Carter's picture & the photographer's own suicide). The viewer can choose to view it dispassionately, considering its artistic merits alone. And not condemn it as a lie only. Interestingly enough, the presence of  Kohn and family (as contrary to the claims of the Anti-Defamation League) is sufficient condition for viewing the video as "artwork" & a type of memorial in its own right. But has artistic expression been given a de jure pass on moral condemnation?  Does the inner tension of the image (the troubling dialectic between really two competing images of the horror of extermination) trump the fear that the video may dehistoricize the Shoah?

What Rancière would say to the Kohn video is, I think, what he's already said in regard to Lanzmann's Shoah, a lengthy passage worth quoting in full:

Representation is not the act of producing a visible form, but the act of offering an equivalent-something that speech does just as much as photography [videography]. The image is not the duplicate of a thing. It is a complex set of relations between the visible and the invisible, the visible and speech, the said and the unsaid. It is not a mere reproduction of what is out there in front of the photographer or the filmmaker. It is always an alteration that occurs in a chain of images which alter it in turn. And the voice is not the manifestation of the invisible, opposed to the visible form of the image. It is itself caught up in a process of image construction. It is the voice of a body that transforms one sensible event into another, by striving to make us 'see' what it has seen, to make us see what it tells us." (93-94)
Kohn's YouTube video leaves us with a silent tension between the visible horror of mass extermination and the unspoken  horror of art's ability to turn just about anything, however intolerable its image, into artistic expression: unspoken, or invisible, or unrepresentable because to say it would be too unpardonable an offense against human decency. There's this other 'image' lying within the horror of content (shoving aside the thing itself) that is a troubling nexus of competing ways of seeing the stalking vulture, anorexic model & dancing Holocaust victim. A troubling 'something' that's perhaps the product of a hypermediated age.

Thursday, July 15, 2010

A pwoermd poem: or thoughts on the syntax of Geof Huth's letter


The writer twists language, makes it vibrate, seizes hold of it, and rends it in order to wrest the percept from perceptions, the affect from affections, the sensation from opinion—in view, one hopes, of that still-missing people (Deleuze and Guattari cited in Jacques Rancière's The Emancipated Spectator)


Recently received, 5 July 2010, by air mail from Schenectady, NY a pwoermd-poem (perhaps the first ever at this address!)by minimalist poet Geof Huth (dbqp qbdp pdqb bqpd), that enjoins me, first of all, to "silentlisten". Formalities forsworn, he writes:

Conrad,

silentlisten

hardest
(most studiously)
at the lack of

As if he knew me! I open and read, & the poem comes closing in, unrelenting in the way it enforces a "silentlisten" solemnity: to the overstudious (like me) who like to write and read aloud, it's quite a wake-up call. I think Huth's also got me wondering if it's a full suite he's given me here or a collection of doors. Thought rhythms that break against anything as porous as the human ear are bound to seem uneventful at times, but if they derive from the smallest intelligible one-word poems out there: the pwoermd, they can have a quite remarkable effect on both ear & the artistic sensibility. The pwoermd, and anything arising out of it (like a complete poem) revels in a syntax coked with constant "fusions", "fissions" (Grumman's principles of minimalist formation) of letters, words, and visuals. Every verse a crashing sense and I'm being asked in his letter to catch a wave, for once.

Silent stresses of the artist's rickety easel.

Or the true 'elided' disaster in every news article I've ever read.

The abruptness of a line like "at the lack of" that's still lyric-friendly, still alliterative & graceful can be instructive as well, introducing a dissonance still capable of language. The pwoermd-poem honors a speaking voice of sorts (contrary to one Language misconception):

yet a voice
is more
than
ruined words
or less

trill treble trillium
in a wooded shade

I find, instead of  narrative bedrock, a series of micro-rhythms scattered throughout Huth's pwoermd-poem. The voice, freed from granitic intentions, suddenly feels lighter and surer of its materials, since there's no compelled adoration of the usual form & function rule. Lines and stanzas cannot be parsed, coupled or yoked to a soldering narrative merely (as per a formalist reading): here the poem as a whole (the only sense in which it coheres) seems to comprise of an exploitable source of future pwoermd-formations. That is its primary syntactical mandate. A pwoermd poetry (and poetics) is based on "ruined words or less"but by "ruined" Huth means to restore them, at the same time, to what words have always been designed to do: viz. splice, dice and recoil from the familiar as often as possible. Here's a poetry inseparable from the one-word 'things' (words, letters, typographical shorthands) they essentially are.

 As if the pwoermd bandit's stolen standard lineation and left us with a  radically compressed, "infra-verbal" (Grumman) network. A poem of isolable filaments as delicate as the spaces they shape. Could not "trill treble" become "tritreble' by pulling free one filament, collapsing space to make room for letter fusion? A collapsing not a switching per se since language seems to work by a "holey space" (Deleuze) matrix. A foamy order of pwoermd formation comprising of easily elided (or "fused", "fissured", etc.) parts by whose openings alone any pwoermd-grid can be known. In the same way as the rickety easel is a segue to van Gogh's boots and flowers. A list of traditional poetics things, to be recharged and refitted for pwoermd work, is now made possible, Huth giving us "treeroot" as if to show the way (& there'll be more):

treeroot rising
(wave, muscle)
from the earth
motionless but moving
still

the muteness of stones

gravel spread
for traction among
grass and plantain

rock in place
(of loonsong
and moonless
that it might be

no rose
but rose before

me a rose
before me
and then
me

A list made possible by the initial impetus of the lyricist's recoverable voice: almost a "treeroot" rising like a wave or muscle, the silent and inexorable pressure, and not the real "tree root", behind every real organic growth. Perhaps the "no rose/but rose before" verse is inclining towards (but really eclipsing) a traditional poetics with standard "rose" symbolism at its service. Perhaps the place for talking about things that grow lies somewhere between language and a full-blown poem. Between "earth" and "the muteness of stones". Who knows?

But a verse integrity is possible in which "me arose" or "mea rose" ( by Grumman's "fissional" principle of minimalist creation) can be offered as easily interchangeable lines, in case you're tempted to try interpreting the whole "me a rose/before me" verse that follows as a principle of the priority of poetic perceiver over perceived. Senses are prioritized on the basis of a more fluid spatial "laxonomy". Words, letters and even the more intractable infra-verbal spaces where pwoermd life doesn't seem possible (if there are any) are all "poetential" areas of growth. The possibility of line (and sense) mutation does, though, seem as wispy as a filament & soluble as "holey space" but a  list of the "poetential" keeps growing, now envisaged not so much as "muscle" as "wave" action.

wave from wave
each wave carries or
moves through multiple
smaller waves water
finding what shape
it must and the loon
'svoice a wavering
two-tone in
black and white

a motor can grumble but not groan
passionless fruit

the
flag
wave
but not tire
trackless

The wave that changes into "the loon/'svoice", the "passionless fruit" of a groaning motor and the wave's (like the flag's) "trackless" identity—what are these, really? I am not the dispossessed reader we're expected to be so I'll propose some pwoermd commentary, happy to engage in a collective practice of seeing the quintessential pwoermd in the poem Huth has sent, "finding what shape it must" (Similar perhaps to the way Plato encouraged audiences not to be passive viewers of the play but its choros, vigorous participants in the dance (Jacques Rancière)).

To begin with, the essence of flag wave is its "flagth"', a figure reducible to sound and image. A figure of breath and breadth. And to find the sense in which flag or wave can be trackless (perhaps the poem's most ambiguous figure), I'll offer a Grumman-type arithmetical poem, made of clearly defined parts, in which "the/flag/wave/but not tire/trackless" line is converted into a "not tire>trackless=flag or wave" replacement rule, where "wave" or "flag" means any arbitrarily selected poetical object. Say what you like about foamy universes, there are always ways to keep the things inside them held in playful tensions til other sound, lexical & logical coordinates replace them. Suspensions without resolution. Adding "th" to the end of "flag", for instance, is a way to show that it's neither a hidden poem (intended to be written)  nor a language in which to discuss & write the poem. "Flagth" is its own irreducible thing: one product of an endlessly reconfigurable grid of freely given and shared letters, sounds & visuals.

less than perception

the eyelist
and (skewed) sees
anew

the streambed
the lawnbank
the bushsheath
the hemlocksun
the floweflowers

Yes, poetry as"less than perception". It is, as Rancière's said in regards to theatre, "the third thing that is owned by no one, whose meaning is owned by no one, but which subsists between them, excluding any uniform transmission, any identity of cause and effect." (The Emancipated Spectator 15). Here's an "eyelist" of poetically interesting "skewed" vision, where a simple negation of space draws together normally separable materials (like "stream" & "bed", "flower" & "flowers") but without seeming random, wilful: where the "list" is inseparable from the "eye". Not an uncoupling, of course, but a poetic practice or energy dedicated to the acquisition of "these indelible foods/before me...gathered into salad".

th'eating
brea'thing
unth'reat'ning

sky
blue skies
her blue skies
her two blue skies

looking down on me

silistently

she moves
thoroughly you

The "communitarian" impulse of Huth is now becoming evident, poet wanting nothing more than to eliminate contaminants of a too interested 'academic' reading that's already commoditized much of contemporary poetry, and restore to it something of its essential "th'eating", "brea'thing" nature. The letter I received was a call for literary filiation & an invitation to join in the choros of artistic life.  Celebrate a wonderfully porous world mirrored in language (and vice-versa) where "blue skies" can look down on us both, "silistently" and "thoroughly".

* I'd like to acknowledge my indebtedness (if it isn't already obvious) to the writings of French philosopher, critic and theorist Jacques Rancière, the discovery of whose writings has lately amounted to a re-discovery of self.

Monday, July 12, 2010

Goodbye to the neighbour's cat



With milk on the chin and feathery lip,
  (uncoiling, to show you)
she mews, & rises misty-nosed, too
  because you'd like
  to say bye

But she turns the tension into a nap,
  into a very 'O':
so I can bear easily the milk on her lip,
  (coiling, she shows me)
  when I go

Saturday, July 10, 2010

Ed Baker's "DE:SIRE IS"

                                                          Chin Fay Ling

1 of 26 LIMITED EDITIONS signed and stamped by the author, DE:SIRE IS is a welcome addition to my personal library of the writings of American visual poet Ed Baker. This 12 page chapbook published by The Knives Forks and Spoons Press (Newton-Le-Willows in the UK) is unlike other Baker publications in that visuals (except for the Chin Fay Ling dancing image on cover & personal stamp) don't appear in the text, and the poems, untitled, printed in a light small serif font (almost too wispy for the page), are set in a long vertical (top-to-bottom) format that give the act of reading a scroll-like feel. The text is mostly left-justified with the exception of one smaller centered piece that concludes the work's first section.

Ed's written in my copy, "What's a phantasy?" beside a self-portrait, as if it were my own personal epigraph for the poetry ahead. Baker's stamp is another curious way to introduce himself: perhaps a distinctively Eastern take on the idea of authorial intention.The stamp (as Baker's told me in email correspondence) is a chop carved/made by artist Wink K. Leong in Portland, Oregon. Baker's Chinese name was given to him in 1973 by Angela Jung Palandri, a leading teacher/scholar at that time in Oriental Studies." The name reads", as Baker says, " P'ei Ai Te [that] translates to "Truth", "Love". Te is a "proper name" it is Chinese characters not Korean.... though Kanji is Kanji all around."

The work could be the first time (with its absence of Baker STONE GIRL visuals) the poet deals with a textuality of the page. Some simple typographical manipulations are alone sufficient to homage his Chin Fay Ling muse who is everywhere both inspiration and addressee. Textuality, yes, but without the usual lyrical void of much experimental writing today. DE:SIRE IS is a lyrical, narrative and minimalist work, seeming to unify a diversity of artistic modes in one dominant muse-figure; and spacing, ellipses and capitalization are among many possible ways to create verses that, far from problematizing, respectfully advance traditional contexts. The effect is not one of hybridity but homogeneity :

                                                                     desire is......

space   everything                                                                              to write into this
                                                                                                         is possibility  as

                                                                      BRUSH MIND

None of the cold, abstract verbal play for its own sake in which the image is substituted for conceptual experimentation. Poetry in Baker's hand (and poetry for him is a manual skill: artisanal, above all) is never ever overlaid with standard language tricks (flarfs & "mash ups") of contemporary Language poetics. Like all significant cultural expression his work comprises of real materials, stone, paint, wood and language and takes its place in a literary continuum from Blake to Oppen to Corman to Hidetaka Ohno: the result of a disciplined and finely tuned Eastern minimalist style (that I've discussed in previous Baker posts here). The materials here are so attuned to the work's general design and impetus that each line (whatever its syntactical status) can be read individually as haiku or as haiku-lines within a larger narrative:

nurture

woman in the moist  towards

who first speaks /embraces/ an erotic first

or speaks careful of what determines   -care

politics become her
nature

Baker's poetry never interrogates its practice and language (as it is fashionable to do these days): it is BRUSH MIND at work, apt metaphor for the artistic impetus of most of his productions as well as a description of the freeing & nomadic style of work. What makes it contemporary (particularly if Baker seen as growing out of a 70s literary period) is its refusal to limit itself strictly to genre: arguably even Baker's  minimalist poetry ("shorties" as he calls them), art, calligraphy, sculpture all derive from the same experimentalist period as L=A=N=G=U=A=G=E, the watershed New American Poets anthology, and Smithson's sculptures. Baker can play with sentences & mine new semantical fields with the best of them, refusing to let his meanings mesh too easily with spacing, punctuation & lineation, creating playful tensions instead: as in "around and dbls  doubles back up on becoming poe m   you set your/down/margins!"

But poetics won't intentionally try to undo poetry itself: there's too much respect for muse, materials and literary ground Baker walks on. There's too much literary sense. When Baker dropped out of writing years ago it was to work as a builder, the years in between serving to solidify an already developing sense of working with real tools, & building real things. A sense of the materiality of work that isn't the vacuous intellectual game that people like Silliman have turned it into.The result is that Baker's is always an art-affirming " yes  yes  yes" to the prevailing no to voice and authorial design. Lovely poetic artifacts (like "glass bowl", "fish's home") can never be subordinated to triteness: the center does hold (even in the age of Language disanalogy & disfigurement):

edge
towards
sun
night
becomes
moon

's black

circumference

dresses up
center

Here the pains to "reach out" can result in contact with a poetry and language. If the page reads down the whole text (like a scroll), a definite sort of textual artifice, it's still the flowing or parted hair of Baker's muse we're actually envisaging. This is the personalized "phantasy" Baker's invited me to read.And (as I've said) if visuals don't appear in this work, his Chin Fay Ling muse still foregrounds the work, completing an otherwise colourless canvas:

                                        what color
                                         demands
                                         demands
                                             she

                                         punctuate

Thursday, July 8, 2010

On my 55th

Through dawn, noon & dusk, grass goes
     —clumsily juggled—
and sumac works quietly at the edge (or slows!)

 and  what the killer is  —woken or alive—
or isn't, comes only by going to the kill

Still you're kissed by the book (as the weak are)
  poem at a time,
and tea and the hour don't mix anymore

Safety in touch, at the doors, and any relief
from intolerable grief (my dear!)

  fine for now,
  will go for the kill

(as you know)