Friday, November 18, 2011

"How the bonobos came to christ"



A more loving, kinder species to eat of the fruit, tangy as the brine A lubricious brow's
  worth the risk

To be safe inside, shirtless, under the broad-  brimmed leaf, in the heat, is worthy
   the preening—& abjection oh!—

freed from the water-stain &  voluntary wound in the thigh that never closes, never

'Collective is the corrective!' she says, as the jaws thrust into  the wind attest

An ugly organ of death is the mouth of a he-spartan cycling and meaning ever to be one
  to loners!

To be holy by the sign of a hand-clap  makes her Lady  — who is  rather crotch-
  respectful to them's as inside—

but teeth grind on and spin greedily, with the toes or rocks & verdures looking
  the same, same as everything!

A slew of rind, under bushel & toes, speak well to the eternal junket of seed, munch
  and tree,
                 two becoming three

Monday, November 7, 2011

"In St. James park"


No I can never go; it is dark beyond my gate;
And my mind could not live out there
                                           (Frank Samperi)
_______

Here are insupportables of life, and suns in a
  standoff with dust

unleash the crows on them—just two crows!—
  The dark wing, as it's mean

 and roguish, (snapt
& torn, too, in the same wind and sun)
 is upon them    
                      Mohawks compete with locals
  for some fear, too

Do they mean to join us, in the parks?

    Wind and the suns
mean no harm, not with all the tents & needles
    in a row:

not when sex confects a church, & compels a lot
      of Love,
          Exudation
          Electricity

They mock the Abbé who offers donuts, the greying
  politico with fairish jaw

                         Girls happy to lie sprawled in yurts,
                                 food out of a can,
                                 cold        

What's it a question of anyways, money, sex, or bodies
  without organs?

Nothing's heavy-handed here! they repeat daily—          
  Look!     just
               isolated
               yurts,
               locals,
               girls, cold-bitten

Monday, October 31, 2011

Some ideas for an "other shore" poetics: reading Samperi's "The Prefiguration"

Frank Samperi

passes over stream
into
dream
other life
pauses
water
other shore (sanza mezzo)         
To be saved I must
slip away from the moderns (The Prefiguration)
It is better, I mean, to be here,
   Where the mind can act
   And make light where there is none,

Than with the crowd, whose mouth defies the sun.
   No I can never go; it is dark beyond my gate;
   And my mind could not live out there (The Prefiguaration)

Why hasn't the abject particling of Language poetry today really gotten anybody's attention? Silliman who's the neoned eye of contemporary America & who likes to post Occupy protesters, of course, will never see as poet Samperi does,"noticing less in front/than behind" (Infinitesimals). Like leftist scholars watching the action from their hotel windows.The transfigurative potential of work, i.e. the sense that it's been done & yet is perpetually nearing the poet's ear, "as if that time [of sitting, journeying, writing] were without reference to another time far back or up ahead" ("Morning and Evening"), seems to have been lost on America's most influential avant (ironically enough!). John Martone certainly knows that nearing presence as if Samperi "stood behind me, looking over my shoulder." Presence felt as breath & spirit. Of transfigurative poetry it can be said (what can never be said of Language poetry),  
The moment you looked into a pool to see heaven was
the moment you in heaven saw a man looking into a pool
to see heaven—("Morning and Evening")
Silliman and Samperi can't ever have been in the same city, can they? They were both reflecting on language at about the same time, weren't they? Every place poet Samperi passes equals the angel in the park, which is to say that a thing seen in a state of motion will reveal its own true nature ("Crystals"). In a kind of Marxian equation we can say the angel is the poem's true "value-form", but not ,of course, til its physical form (the "matter language") has been shucked: here Dante's being stood not on his head but on his poet laurels. It's the spirit of a poetry that we want but without the period associations with the great Florentine. With single-minded devotion to one seer, one late medieval work, Samperi, by his Bronx window, writes angels, old men, the homeless: Samperi who's occupied the park a long time ago & ridden the bus long before the author of Ketjak.

Towards the ideal (goal) of an "other shore" poetics I'll reflect on some exemplars culled from my reading of The Prefiguration, the first in Samperi's celebrated three-volume work comprising of The Prefiguration, Quadrifariam and Lumen Gloriae. By exemplar I mean a distinctive principle of verse construction inspired & guided by the primary Dantean archetype, and capable of its own Commedia journey. In exemplars matters of relation, direction & backwards and forwards motion (any "commotional" concept like these) are irrelevant. As in a collective memory anything able to be 'transfigured' is revealed in poetic forms (or shadows or "companionships" or "confrontations", etc) only: of light, wind, falling birds, almost always randomly given and, again, part of poet Samperi's daily journeys. Though to be found in these only a syntax can be learned and above all an integrity that leaves the poet with no real audience in this world ("Morning and Evening") and a courage to write honestly, since he's bound for the "other shore".

I admit I've carved Language opposition firmly in stone, with Silliman mentioned often as he's done the most to hide the "other shore" from view. The Sentence is, to begin with, a fake abstraction "non solum quantum ad formam, sed etiam quantum ad materiam" ("Morning and Evening"), & worth the pains of disavowing. Any poetical principle that's been accepted by decades of followers as a chose jugée will necessarily occult and denigrate the real. As an object of material consumption only it's been tragically cut adrift from the spiritual with which alone the poem can form community, a neighbourhood, park. The poet reciting the alphabet in the streets is bound to be ignored. And all the poet-academics huddled around their grand piano who think the Sentence, scribbled in the margins, is an essence-grasping thing will also be ignored. Again Aquinas, "in rebus quidem corporalibus apparet quod res visa non potest esse in vidente per suam essentiam".

The mistake, in other words, is to look for the "multiplicity of individuals in a single species":  the sea instead of shorelines gesturing continually towards it, as poet Samperi will say. The sea is at times nothing but ice ("Ferns"). There's too much thought (and the logic of poetry can't do without its pounding negatives), & not enough movement. It's also why Wallace Stevens got it wrong: lakes are never more reasonable than oceans. In short, remove the individual, the Poet, lyrical "I" (whatever), and the man, poet or work, however coerced, will remain eternally perpendicular to the world ("Morning and Evening"). The matter & form of the Sentence, without the true glorified body of the world, won't appear different from anything else & that is the poorest way to get along with angels:
If there's longing for confraternity with the angels, then
every movement a man makes to establish such is a move-
ment toward specific difference ("Morning and Evening")
I once said, for example, that a Watten line, given in many Google translations at once, is suddenly nowhere to be found. Extinction always results from decontextualization. And because something dead like a Watten verse doesn't move— perhaps only an academic's circularity at best— journey is out of the question. Exclusion from the Commedia is another terrible result of decontextualization work. Samperi's poem, on the other hand, is the Gift ("Morning and Evening").

So the "other shore" poetics is, at a literal level, a "Cry out to the angels above the city—"a type of invocation or representation certainly of the misery of quotidian existence ("Morning and Evening") but, more crucially, a figural balance between poets and the world. Echoing Levinas poet Samperi speaks of the "face to face" encounter, vision sanza mezzo, one where not even poetry can ever be reduced to an approach ("Crystals"). With Levinasian ethics comes a care for the other the experimentalists have all but trashed. Why would Watten not want to be properly "prefigured" in the first place and not recognized as a transmitter of vital literary culture? Do Watten & Samperi not live in the same world? Through successive generations of readers—not reasoners!— the 'figural' is always destined to appear as a 'prefiguration': and it's angels who gesture the most assiduously towards a world. Subserving the marketplace appetite (as poetry theorists & practitioners do) is a living death equal to the State ("Crystals"), as if we were talking about cultural bureaucracy. And the fate that awaits the poet playing with linguistics can be particularly bad: the most incoherent type of logomachy imaginable.

Below are found some ideas (intimations, perhaps) for an "other shore" poetics gathered together as a lengthening set of recommendations,meant not so much as a curative as restorative: the restoration of something like a world lost in pernicious Language simulacra. They're also referred to as exemplars. I offer, after poet Samperi, only the singular since it alone is the giver of calm and only a "multiplication of species" sings a world that's been stolen from us. To develop the singular into full-blown exposition, however, would be to bring it within earshot of the next generation of Samperi readers: never quite near enough to be felt per suam essentiam but definitely close to the ear.

1. Substitute Commedia for langue: the angel's idealized rhymes for abject particling. The torqued heave of creation itself is sufficient;

2. shed the poetry body to free the seer. Language poets who can't shed the poem necessarily resort to "commodity fetishism";

3. restore the rich tenant of Form/Song, who goes by many names, Dolores, Claudia ("Ferns"), & a child's moon repeated over and over ("Morning and Evening"), the forsythia of conjugal love ("So Close");

4. reading is a type of wing beat: no, reading like the I walking past the El is pure wing beat;

5. the tercet in Dante is certainly an Infinitesimal;

6. the Infinitesimals on rag paper become the new minimalism (interchangeable with verse, sura, sutra, etc), not the"stripped down poetics of Cid Corman" Silliman thinks it is;

7. poetics is never the political but simple poverty or life before God,  the feeling useless, taking the bus home, walking over a "dried stream" ("Branches"), alone;

8. spirit is attentive to rivers and beyond river-banks to the "other shore", like the I riding. In the river the impetus is to go forward. As both Chesterton and poet Samperi wish to say, only the dead can be a complete "afterthought";

9. in Samperi the pigeons flash like the angel at composition. Let's face it, Armantrout, Watten would probably self-consume trying;

10. the Sentence is always "a mean reflective position" ("Morning and Evening") and is why the poem must be shed. I rather like poet Samperi's reducing contemporary poetics to a "Unitary Field Theory" that misses shorelines altogether, everyone being usually too sea-avid. When will they perceive, "Unde perfectio naturae angelicae requirit multiplicationem specierum, non autem multiplicationem individuarum in una specie."

11. talk of failure's forbidden here ("Of Light");

12. in langue metaphor is a trap (Infinitesimals), to be shucked like the poem;

13. like the skop who sings of dead warrior-princes set adrift sings poet Samperi;

14. every poem is a "chipped virgin" or a broken Cupid's head ("Song Book"): the ones protesters haven't taken outside yet and smashed in the streets. The soft self-effacing voice of the "chipped virgin", in particular, imitated by poet Samperi;

15. don't ape the avants, not even Dante or Samperi: "ape Buddha" ("Song Book");

16. number your symbols: eight is for birds, for example;

17. You and I are chief religio-poetic signifiers, yes, as meaning they refer to the You that I essentially am;

18. the soul's limping body ("Of Light");

19. lights and shadows blossom or spring like memory, a fluttering;

20. "whenever it is possible to integrate two separate elements into a single larger element by imagining them as sharing a common participant, the reader will do so" (Ron Silliman)
                                             OR
"If a work is primarily addressed to God, then it follows that the audience isn't essential—in fact, a period that places the movement in the audience whose referential is the standard that impedes draws to itself a principle whose point is finally to exclude totally: therefore, it is right to say that no identification can be telically intended when a work is so primarily addressed." (poet Frank Samperi).

I like how 'telos' tragically cancels the Silliman reader here;

21. to know is to know "angelically" ("Morning and Evening"), every time;

22. the sentence is a Prefiguration, & not the other way round ("Morning and Evening"), sometimes street-dependent (as in the case of a man), sometimes river-dependent (as in the case of an angel);

23. beyond the freight yard is death, & dead leaves;

24. every flame is dying to drop like snow: a kind of buried memory at work. Anything as vital as this will have to await John Martone;

25. memory as a falling of birds ("Branches")—ah!;

26. between every light & shadow a boy falls, the place marked by flowers;

27. see dying as an image of moon-lit hands ("Ferns");

28. some men go about their business, some go to their sorrow ("Morning and Evening");

29. a "new heaven and a new earth": imagine that ("Crystals")!

30. memoria: che miseria!

31. the poet (after Samperi) learns to scan noise;

32. "Neither to sow nor to reap—" ("Morning and Evening")

33. Sunset Debris, for all its questioning, never gives us rows of drunken, feculent images;

34. can the author of Ketjak ever "see beyond" the drunks lying on the street, which means "to gather them up and feed them"? ("Morning and Evening");

35. only in poet Samperi's work do you know where commentary ends & poetry begins.

Sunday, October 30, 2011

Tibetan writer jailed

 
 Tashi Rabten

Given my (young) age and (lack of) qualifications, the appearance of this little book may be premature. After an especially intense year of the usual soul-destroying events, something had to be said, and after pondering on whether to speak out, I finally produced this humble little book between 2008-09, shed like a drop of blood. (Tashi Rabten in his Introduction to Written in Blood)

While the West sleeps in complacency another poet, Tashi Rabten, editor of the banned Tibetan literary magazine Eastern Snow Mountain (Shar Dungri), is imprisoned for daring to write. Copies of the journals & books in which he wrote critically of Chinese government repression in Tibet, especially a book of essays that he co-authored, entitled Written in Blood, were confiscated and publicly burned.

Cases of writers, teachers, poets, entertainers & activists being summarily sentenced and jailed, particularly in the Ngaba county, are actually increasing there. Self-immolations are almost a weekly occurrence. These are the narratives and writings of which Nobels are made.

Below is an example of poetry that will cost a young poet four years of his life, and that's worth protesting. I fear poetry wrung from the heart of oppression will go unnoticed in a country (mine) where cultural expression is viewed (& practiced) as a national entitlement, mostly at taxpayers' expense. Where nothing inflames poetic passions more than the threat of less government subsidies for the arts.

Young Tibetan Master, show us the way out of our "darkness of night".

My Tibet*


by Theurang (Tashi Rabten)

Is it you, the flame that burns in the middle of a storm?
Is it you, the boat that rocks in the sea?
Is it also you, who offers the torch of life in the darkness of night?

Is it you, where there is no freedom?
Is it also you, who is chained and shackled?
Is it you, who writes her history in blood?

Are you a warrior?
Where are your battlefield and the weapons?
Are you a prisoner?
What crimes have you committed?

Is it your sky that the sun shies away from?
Is it your vow to let yourself be silent?
Are these your border guards, the long guns surrounding you?

Freedom is different from restrictions
Because of which you move,
Because of which they tie and bind you, isn't it?

Isn't it you who is being murdered?
Isn't it you who is being jailed?
Isn't it you who is being tortured?
Why is it that you still want to move?
Do you want to move amidst shadows of guns?

No.

Isn't it you who can never be cowed down?
Isn't it you who fiercely burns with passion?
Isn't it you who marches ahead into history?

Don't you need to move even more?
Don't you need to move till the time runs out and the life ends?
*from Burning Tibet

Friday, October 21, 2011

"Storage Case" by John Martone: on minimalism and collage

We would speak instead of instances of a poem – think of the poet as writing down the poem again and again. (John Martone)
My art is about paying attention – about the extremely dangerous possibility that you might be art. (Robert Rauschenberg)

I've almost become used to "small books and ephemera" from John Martone, the homemade booklets with wispy labels & leaf-inlaid & papier-mâché covers, each delicate as a "Chinese blade" (such as a passage, a lamp, a new moon, shooting star), as well as the full-size published collections (such as ksana). The text is the shape of minimalist poetry: the energy buried deep inside will only illuminate it. As Martone says in his online article "The NEOLITHIC (re) turn in poetry"),
A Poem is first of all an amulet, an OBJECT bearing energy... The poem is first of all a charm, relic, medicine, compass, key. We are not talking about the poem sitting on a page like a jewel in a ring but the two inseparable... In this context, to “reproduce” (i.e. publish) a poem widely is to pass on as little of it as the “reproduction” of a painting or sculpture. We would speak instead of instances of a poem – think of the poet as writing down the poem again and again
A Martone poems seems to have been made to fit in the palm, "an OBJECT" indeed whose energy-bearing potential is always to be felt in both the exquisitely delicate lettering, space and construction materials and the beautifully spare (sutra-like) language: it's both a haptic and literary artifact, inseparably produced. The ring and jewel both, and the single splendid artifact, the jewelled-ring, that will ornament any hand that wears it.

I've received from John a copy of his latest publication titled Storage Case (Otoliths, 2011), a work of collage art. But being familiar only with the exquisite minimalism John's gift is now a favourable opportunity to reflect on contrasts. If collage replaces the minimalism (as it does here) or provides a different aesthetic space for it, with language reduced to "shreds and patches" and placed languorously beside pictures & illustrations—under this sort of transformed appearance has the unity of poetry and physical text been discarded? Has some principle of continuity been displaced by a coarser method of juxtaposition more suitable to the avant-garde? Is Martone the collagist necessarily at odds now with his Eastern roots and stylistic temperament?

I maintain the collagist preserves here the integrity & clarity of normal minimalist work through the implementation of some simple principles of design: (i) a square grid form (with an alternating notebook binder & green border) meant not as an imprisoning but enframing device; (ii) a collocation of qualitatively real & significant artifacts, all of which converge in a markedly unDadaist world; (iii) a repeatable collage motif in general suited to represented & narrated things everywhere; (v) and the primacy above all of contemplation over sensation. Martone the artist, creating in a markedly different medium & even for a different audience, is writing the same poem "again and again", the haiku poet's way of defending cultural homogeneity (as against the pure disjunctiveness of Schwitters and Rauschenberg) &the almost unlimited potential of a minimalist poetics.

Martone's collage field is, as I've said, not contained by a sum of its disparate parts: rather it's a space for recognizable motif and an homogeneous, well ordered 'lyricism'. It's the presentation of art form almost at odds with itself. In a review of Martone's ksana Marshall Hryciuk says this about the preservation of haiku poetry in the postmodernist age:

"Postmodernist," while being an accurate term for describing artists and writers who feel that modernism and its moral initiatives have had their day, is still a critical and academic term and comes from outside of inspiration. It's a term that seems ill-applied to haiku poets in general and one that does nothing to inform Martone's quiescent approach. He begins in devotion, in meditation, and observation, and his style, so much as he has one, is a surrender to the ebb and flow of living and witness.
I like that "living and witness" rather than the usual postmodernist (especially Language) particling of reality: I particularly appreciate the reference to Martone's quiescence (as opposed to the Silliman denigration of formalist poetry as "quietist"). The first "1965/2010" section of Storage Case, for example, can seem like haiku in terms of its own meditative and quiescent properties. Comprised of the typographical & pictorial, in particular of a fragmented arrangement of Kodak snapshots, incongruously placed colour swaths & landscape aerial shots, & several disparate images of genes and molecules, the "1965/2010" works may certainly give the utter randomness of typical collage. But slapdash creations they're not, the collage elements anchored (not subordinated) to what I consider the work's central "storage case" frame (Consider the cover's own fragmented packing-case image, with ghoulish inscription). There is something that amounts to a haiku "shock" effect when theme and disparate elements appear together in this way.

The poetic "OBJECT", in other words, has turned into a pure visual with its own "kireji" moment. The haiku imprint has been transferred onto the collage page itself, & the effect is not playful juxtaposition for its own sake but a revelation of qualities in things able to create, within a picture space, the "ebb and flow of living and witness" (Hryciuk). It's a kind of Eastern immanence to which the Martone work aspires, the mystery of the world without the chaos, uncommitted as he certainly is to any Dadaist portrayal of wilful randomness & heterogeneity. There's reconciliation of parts where we'd normally expect disintegration. True to its haiku roots the work is 'organic'. The page-9 collage (reproduced here) is the barest of those found in part "i." and probably by that fact alone the purest. It's made up simply of three collage elements within the central notebook binder frame: faint green colour-patches, a sailing boat image and some rather elemental DNA drawings, and yet the noisiness of pieces gratuitously arranged can be stilled in a single pure land meditation, Infinite Life itself being its object.

And part of any significant meditation is text reverence. Passages from Steinbeck's Of Mice and Men encircle, border and overlap the visuals in all but one of the part "i." works, just as commentary might accompany a treatise or sacred text. In the page-10 collage (again here) there's nothing elusive or arbitrary about the images of colliding particles, faint frequencies & scientist by his microscope all resting atop snippets of Steinbeck dialogue. (The bottom lettering is reminiscent of the subscriptio in a John Heartfield photo montage) The dialogue with visuals constitutes a repeatable collage motif that works, just as DNA chromosome bits inhabit almost all of part "ii." The true collage is to be seen, not at some purely aesthetic level as art alone but in quiet observance of life-stillness, at both micro & macro levels. The whirling vortex here catches the wandering eye that's otherwise too distracted by the parts and not attentive enough to the whole: a viewing preparatory to meditation.

There's nothing controversial about this; the two things, in short, that are always said to characterize typical collage, its indeterminability & unrepresentability, simply don't apply here, Martone's Storage Case rather returning the viewers back to something like traditional (perhaps Renaissance) principles of construction. And I've only examined two collages & fragments of a skull packing-case. (The "canoes" section is the place to see a full-blown "storage case" motif) Even a preoccupation with molecules, diodes & wireless telegraphy establishes a relationship to the holy discoverable in "things". It seems even in a work of collage art Martone hasn't strayed at all from the venerable "ephemera" I've grown accustomed to.

Tuesday, October 11, 2011

A message for the protesters about to descend on Canada

Marzieh Vafamehr

I don't often stray from the poetry mandate of this blog but the egregious stupidity of the masses sometimes makes it impossible for me to keep silent.

To those who are about to protest the evils of global capitalism in Canada I'd like to make a suggestion. Take your tents, pickets, bikes and masks and make your way to the Iranian embassy in Ottawa. Your rants, tactics and misplaced energies ought to be directed at real oppression. Iranian actress Marzieh Vafamehr is about to be condemned to a one-year jail sentence and 90 lashes for her role in a movie ("My Tehran for Sale") exploring the topic of artistic freedom in Iran.

Protest the violence against women there, my misguided leftists, and the systematic murder of gays/lesbians and the anti-Israel venom and the persecution of Christians and the almost daily flogging of young people who dare to dissent from the Ahmadinejad regime. Look abroad for the terror under which millions continue to live today in the Middle East. Link arms with your Syrian, Tunisian, Egyptian brothers & sisters who oftentimes die for their beliefs.

I tire of your self-serving talk and dusty demonstrations. You have nothing to complain about here! For once tether action to real social justice & speak for the exploited, brutalized and marginalized, like Marzieh Vafamehr.

Friday, October 7, 2011

Karen Houle's "during": oughtn't the poet-philosopher to have known better?


                              Out isn't where she thinks she went in (during)
I take it almost as a certainty that the academic ought not to write poetry. It's probably truer to say that subservience to theory is the  primary cause of the disastrous poetry being written at campuses everywhere, and there others—such as tenure, publication pressures, collegial self-esteem, etc.—contributing their small share. As an inductive proposition, of course, I anxiously await the one disconfirming case of the theorist who writes exemplary verses or would eagerly consider to what extent the exception isn't just an interesting coincidence. I've tended to cite only confirming instances because there are, after all, so many of them. Well, to be fair, they may not prove the conclusion but they certainly establish it as very likely.

Karen Houle's book of poetry titled during is very probably another case of disastrous academic poetry. Are the cards stacked that pitilessly against her? The Canadian associate Professor with an interest in the philosophy of Gilles Deleuze, author here of a book of poetry heavily staked in a key "plane of immanence" view of knowledge (such as its divisions into 'During', 'Duration', 'Endure" and 'Durable' strongly imply), will have to prove (to me) that contemporary 'process'-metaphysics can be wed to her lyric.Yes, lyric. If Houle must serve as the 'I'-observer of Deleuzian transformations & give voice to the interplay of language and the perceiving body,as in "Someone, or the thought of someone, plops itself down—/in my corolla region; in the rising sun's brief, seasonal/ struggle I can hear" ("Second, During", 11), the 'lyrical' property is one she will be obligated to keep. To lose the "I" to theory (as I fear she does) is tantamount to failure.

 In fact, the success of academic poetry, here in Houle's work & anywhere else, hinges on whether experimentation and the "I"-subject can appear together without having to endure too much permeability or a bad case of what Houédard calls "borderblur". To write, & make tropes conform to, a wilfully transgressive language—as per poetry exercise—isn't a processual aesthetics worthy of the name. For a poetry that properly incarnates the "sensations" of daily existence one must turn to Wallace Stevens, Hart Crane. Just how hard she tries to make lyricism a function of a predominantly inhuman, almost grotesque realm of "becomings" is evident in places like
Life boils.

Watercycles char
sideways, lateral-driven cyclone spumes.

Resin flees from one ring to the next
through the trick-hatch ("Fourth, During" 15)
or,
Like a borning calf sliding in fuck-ooze,
he imagines, homunculated feminine
capacity for endless more; a liar-shimmer
highway of rubber insides, bat-black
verminy thick: sickens. ("Discretion" 41)
or,
Getting to say how you need it said
is what we have been saying

all along and when we see it

no doubts frame it cheap as black-out,
no unsubstantiated charges hanging bitch
teat in the downward air,

no weapons-grade anger
spruce sting bat swoop above his and her heads
swarming between us ("Modesty Lesson No. 3" 49-50)
where the "life-boil" images try clumsily to become real "lines of flight". Deleuze & Guattari, champions of "a material power of language", do urge us, in very elegant & passional terms, to "witness a transformation of substances and a dissolution of forms, a passage to the limit or flight from contours in favor of fluid forces, flows, air, light, and matter, such that a body or a word does not end at a precise point."(A Thousand Plateaus, 109). And what better food for metaphor, what better gateway to the radical open-endedness of poetry in general, than "flows, air, light, and matter"? Bachelard certainly knew the poetic value of earth's elementals.

It's regrettable, however, that Houle can work her way only through predictable groupings or that she resorts to them at all. "During" & "Duration", for example, make an interesting pair. Presumably "During" is process to "Duration"'s fleeting solidity. In "During", poetry's "moving matter" is reduced to a woodcutter figure "[who] instructs me/on the legal centre of wood"("Fourth, During"15)—a too predictable carpentry tool analogy!—with plenty of ash & poplar images to go around;  representations of"air" appear, among other things, in watery and silky things ("Fifth, During"16) like fish & nylon; and Houle's "fluid forces" are recast as the "pre-vibrational undodgeable" ("Seventh, During"18) motion of a train or a rickety bridge. It strikes the reader more as fanciful automatic writing than the radical deterritorialization of objects, bodies & sensations. "Each day I tilt like zinc/tarp all day one way" ("It Was Summer We Decided to Marry"25) could have easily been read in Schwitters.

In "Duration", on the other hand, "fluid forces" have cooled—for the duration only—into a narrative in perpetual flux, presumably the poet's own. While we are too busy doing philosophy, Houle seems to say, life momentarily congeals and then escapes through one of many apertures, leaving the "holey" space of paper after confetti's been punched out ("Guilt or Dread What An Amazing Instrument You Are" 28) or dreams issuing out of a husband's mouth ("Modesty: Lesson One" 32) or, of all things, a sea draining from a stem glass ("Forgiveness" 34). And where holes don't only appear there's also a kind of supporting "meat", "skin" and "flesh" armature for something that looks very much like a "Body without Organs (BwO)", the symbol perhaps of the many indeterminate thresholds existing between bodies & sensations or a sense of their varying intensities. The poem "Because We Were Prepared To Make Use Of Each Other" (29), among others like it, is a perfect summing up of all the Deleuzian categories to be found in during, "matter", "fluid forces" and a BwO-type Figure arrayed predictably & faithfully down the page:
Two by two in a harness of blended capability—
our handmade house with its hundred movable parts:

Parts to organize the light for sleeping,
parts for being all alone and
parts for being alone with you.

Your voice soon bent to fit my keyhole
was the opening in you to the outside world.

One thing safe inside another,
the high talk began

brutalizing one's mouth by the questions coming out of it.

Feet melt on rungs of deadly daylight.
Skin bangs on its hinges all night.

My breasts still warm dead doves—
picture window, mistaken for open sky. (29)

"Endure" and "Durable" fare no better as opposable poetic principles: no lovable odd-balls these to engage the reader. There are the usual openings, endless transformations (of God into river, cotton candy into silly girls, to name a couple from "On The Paper Anniversary Of The High-Wire Act" 55) and fluid forces of change (such as "mangling pretty phrases out of/loamy inert matter" in "By This Method The Mother Tongue Becomes" 69). There are the interminable exchanges between language and a prevalent "process"-philosophy, such as "shit snow", "obscene float", "yellow ringlets dangling like giant sperm", "Sinuses' private lessons", "Tube-tanged air" (from "My Various Daughters" 71) multiplying beyond necessity. The concluding "Durable" section, with its exploration of other bodies, ideas & states of affairs, reads like an angry anti-logocentric (anti-socratic) feminist tract—very reminiscent of Atwood—with daughters ("Durable No. 4" 90), Buddhist misogyny ("More Women Advice From The East" 92) and even some environmentalist rant ("Durable No. 6" 94). Now Deleuzian "becomings" become social causes:  the "I"-observer the "I"-activist. Houle's clearly violated a key non figuratif non objectif principle of Deleuzian aesthetics:  almost every line on Houle's page signifies or illustrates or narrates.

Perhaps the object here is just to endure & trudge on, through Houle's tetralogy, into the interminable talkativeness to which the poet-philosopher's reduced language & the lyrical journey (after Beckett). If this is the game-plan, then poetry's been turned into self-critique (a parody?) of poet & her materials, and how differently during would seem to me. But I don't think Houle's self-reflexive enough for this: the one thing that would've saved her, the potential in lines like "Each year is nothing more than a rolling over to relieve the/stiffness" and "Today the sad riffling lean of March on the pack-ice at the pilings/tired like our believing it" ("Endure No. 7" 79), seems to have eluded her. Here the narrative can have turned into nonnarrative, the academic-poet narrator into what Deleuze (in Francis Bacon: the logic of sensation) calls the "Figure" (71), with rythmical variations on the "becomings" of things like "the sad riffling lean of March".

Houle's are always misspent energies, however: well-intentioned to be sure, eagerly availing herself of the theory but just not up to the job. For transformation an equally transformative language is required. The effect is decidedly that of the postmodern enthusiast given to writing spurts inspired by her reading of a single philosophical source, and in her hurry to make theory fit, she's stilled the "infinite movement of thought" (from Deleuze's What is Philosophy?). I ought to be able to say of her poetry (but can't) what Deleuze said rightfully of Francis Bacon's paintings, a body of work to which he himself went for self-validation:
In place of formal correspondences, what Bacon's painting constitutes is a zone of indiscernibility or undecidability between man and animal. Man becomes animal, but not without the animal becoming spirit at the same time, the spirit of man, the physical spirit of man presented in the mirror as Eumenides or Fate. (Francis Bacon 21)
That wonderful blending of spirit and artistic subject in a pure animality (materiality) of work is nowhere to be seen in Houle. Saying in repetitive, almost formulaic verse—as the academic-poet does—that poetry such as hers moves by real affections, & even more devastatingly real "chaosmic" & deterritorializing forces doesn't make it so: the work rather refers to poet herself & turns poetry into a bland narrative of ideas. The dynamism she's striving for must draw deep from the well of 'hidden' fires & leave the reader with real poetical "matters" irreducible to her books, and for that talent is required. She really ought to have known better. And she ought to have seen above all the effigy of the lyrical "I" that always results from a misappropriated reading of a favourite author.