
"A great poet always dissolves the technique -- the technique never shows -- is never showing -- true!" (Frank Samperi)
I received one day the most unexpected email from novelist/poet ginamarie lobianco who'd said that friend and mentor John Martone had mentioned my site to her. She'd wondered if I might like to review some of her work at my "Word-Dreamer". Both the self-introduction and affiliation to America's great master of the short verse, of course, endeared me to her instantly. Lately I've been in the mood to celebrate literary mentorship, verse purity and the future of poetry. I'm glad to know ginamarie lobianco.
ginamarie is publisher, novelist and poet but (as poet) successor to a tradition of American short verse and a spiritual poetry I could gladly compare (in its more minimalist haiku and pomes form) to that of Frank Samperi and John Martone. But in what she calls "epic breaths" I detect the freer movements of Ashbery and DiPrima . The haiku, pomes and epic breaths she's been kind enough to have assembled for me form the basis of my estimation of her poetical work. And hers, I find, are the delightful "dissolution" (in Samperian parlance) into oddly engaging literary types, spiritualties and even a (if interestingly postmodern) penchant of her own for opacity and ambiguity. What's resulted from this is a tenderness of the poet's own-- I instantly detect-- that's wedded fragilely to the frighteningly real world of what is, after all, the formless & the spiritless.
In the young artist the preservation of 'forms' in a literary environment not favourable to them will take the imprint of a particularly acute observation of place and circumstances: a style, in short, not different from (her)self at all. In her American haiku series 'form' is easily interchangeable with the place where she calmly gathers her impressions. For instance, there's nostalgia for the youthful eternities of 60s culture-heroes that's ironic since it's either the Jack [Kerouac] of her poetry or the Jack [Kennedy] of her parents that may be intended: "life is precious/dead jack", and a kind of undergraduate reverence for that greatest iconoclast-traditionalist of them all, T.S. Elliot: "i have measured my life/in coffee spoons,/too". She's also capable of sudden (comical) denudations of traditional haiku form itself, as in "free guitar/no strings attached" and of playful versions of the (by now outworn ) language as representation conundrum: "caution:/caution sign". Haiku in lobianco turn into small and arrestingly odd stills but given every bit as much as Eastern haiku to illuminative (aha!) moments through lexical contrasts ("a/part/a/gain"), irreverent nature worship ("making funny faces/at mountains") and even comical effect ("eat a four leaf clover/shit out a luck").
The 'pomes' seem actually to be extended haiku, each line a succession of "stills" juxtaposed for the same sorts of "illuminative" moments as in lobianco's "american haiku". From the first "untitled" pome the following excerpt is typical of the 'haiku' verse:
And in autumn, when our floor is a red carpet of leaves
and the windows are covered with
the bare bones branches of trees that lean towards us,
from the pink sky,
the sound of birds singing replaced by the hissing noises of trucks braking, rushing, roaming,
our new sense of comfort, for anywhere we lay our heads we can call our home.
From this passage arise any number of short verse arrangements, such as "autumn/a red carpet of leaves" in the first two lines and in the next two, "pink sky/bare bones branches of trees", among others. The transformations into short verse are not so much procedural as connatural: short intensely imagistic bursts that invite observation from many potentially merging viewpoints. Even where poet-narrator intervenes, as in the lines
And I contemplate what’s frozen there, a gaze
we’ve both gotten stuck in
one that couldn’t be
faked
three inseparable chains
and a phoenix from the recycled smoke, a call that never came…
the 'haiku' strands, disparate and yet working towards some unified telling, seem also to call out for individualized attention: such as "a gaze/I contemplate what's frozen" or the more fanciful "a call/a phoenix from the recycled smoke". Perhaps to see the intensely perceived in the quilt of the larger poem is announced in lobianco's "you can harmonize with just about anything". It's perhaps what saves the poem from the surrealist ménage it might otherwise turn into. I see in her search for the "objective correlative” (again, T.S. Eliot) of keen poetical insight a clear indebtedness to Martone. The poetic pageantry of the young poet is, needless to say, not necessarily that of her teachers or even her own literary models.
Evidence of this poetical insight attuned to (but easily separable from) the intricate whole of young poet's world is to be found in "The Wish" where the "But I am fixing my Lazarus legs" line acts as both refrain and composite (very Buddhistic) image of the death-in-life that is sexual attraction. As also in the poem's Eliotian anti-heroic images of "mermaids" in "The Wish" and "our sailboat drifting past the drain" in the second pome, "the shape of a home". Literary patrimony--and it's interesting to note the intentional "home" and "pome" rhyme here-- gets reduced to the tedium of home life. Almost every line in "the shape of a home" rings with a fake mythology to which it still laughably aspires: such as mytho-heroic sailboats skirting the drain's own deadly whirlpool, or the indirect references to the Atalanta story in "an awkward race" and "throwing stones/they told us were inherently gold", or the Orphean allusion to "the trees turned to you":
Indian names
our sailboat drifting past the drain
riding the trail
of a horse that never came
an awkward race
throwing stones
they told us were inherently gold
the trees turned to you
in the shape of a home
with your choice of straw or bricks
or awful tricks
what to believe
when he swore he’d never leave
now his odyssey
a detour setting traps
for when your horses turn to rats
The "epic breaths" (particularly "No Buffalo") enjoy greater scope with their own sustained lament for lost love or, more probably, a literary imagination native to place ("There is no buffalo"), but, true to its title, is likewise a product of conventions inherited from its predecessors, with every line a possible 'horizontal' haiku, for example, and the entire poem a field of many possible insights into contemporary poetics (very reminiscent of Ashbery). The opening lines give a fairly representative sampling of the whole, particularly in the purposely misapplied epics ("tales of Cyclops santa") and elegiacs ("There is no buffalo/There is no bohemia"). lobianco transgresses genre borders this way with astonishing facility and offers every line as if it were the only line:
There is no buffalo
There is no bohemia
The Indian blanket wrapped in winter and leaving me like some sad holiday
Yr ghost that coughs like my heat come Christmas
And the VACANCY sign is begging for the wise men’s forgiveness
Like the pizza delivery boy and the case of the missing Monroe
Which wound up on his door with tales of cyclops santa and my memories of you
When it’s always time for you to go
The long haired child left me with my balcony pre-stoned
& now the Lost Boys climb it in the middle of the night and we sit in clouds of smoke
And I don’t know how long I can fight them off‐ the loom was broke
And I can’t sleep cause even the guitar leaks and we put the X in the box just
As a joke
"Water Walk", even more freely inventive and daring (a case of lobianco coming more into her own), is both fiercely original and cleverly assimilative, a gradually evolving poetic process of which the poet is very aware. And what seems to be evolving is a sense of the jangling tunes of spirituality in the postmillennial world. Aside from the haiku it is my favourite piece and it's my favourite precisely because it's the most daringly spiritual. Again, only a few lines will give the sense of the whole:
The white elephants lead the parade, it was on Good Friday,
Coming back for their drums down the old Avenue
Marching to Darn That Dream on yr wooden music box
Bent out of key and stomped in the street once the saints marched
Out of a crowd of circus silhouette s and Side car Achilles
Peter was carving disbelief with Caution Tape to block the streets
And setting up a roadside Arcade under tents and neon lights
Standing under the awning out of the rain
And yawning orcas carrying constellation s made up of the blandly expressions on Jonah’s ivory face
And when grandfather clocks finish up at the docks all of the shipwrecked orphans show up on the door step of yr place
And leave ashes on yr floor and trip down yr fire escape
And yr alley marshes and sound of beer can crunches
The way that we can’t afford postage
Darn That Dream!
The whole's either a dream or the nightmarishly real world in which the salvific (of "Good Friday", "Water walk" & "Solomon", "bedpost Beatitudes and Mount Olive mouth organs") fares no better than pure American "spectacle" (of "belching Holidays", "parables on plates at rest stop diner", and "Mount Olive’s stairways going out of business"). Particularly language itself can be seen to "dissolve" in this wasteland: "And a trapeze messenger in a vest telling tragic dangling in the balance the drip / dried plastic cups and empty tables and throw away chairs about ". I might be tempted to call the poet a viator figure herself and say the "Water walk" journeying is only marginally figurative, the landscape too unmistakably Eliotian, the human drama hidden in thwarted speech all too Beckettian. I even wonder as I read 'Water Walk" what the dialogue and actions of characters referenced here could possibly have been or what they might have meant to anyone if we'd had them. But they did signify to her at least a poet's world and the startling " euphoric machinery hum" of American life which it is her unique mandate to record in the most vividly real terms.
I am glad indeed to have met ginamarie lobianco. I couldn't have been more pleasantly startled to discover that (even in the digitized glossolalia of contemporary poetry) introductions are still possible and traditions can be respectfully loosed by the young into new ways to walk on water. "Darn That Dream!"
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