Tess
(for William Michaelian, who helped me write a better poem)
And as being sadly tall among the misty swedes & turnips
she goes to the summit where weeds
spill over an abbey wall, like spidery froth pulled to right or
left in the breeze,
and she sloshes through the mud (to right or left)and is taken
for an elegant heron in heels,
revelatory without a cause & groundbreaking without a sigh,
and rises like an early apple blooth,
like the most expert bird in the world, & hides in the withy bed
and avoids every lure imaginable—
Tess the sexless, spotless in one last desperate plea for seed
And as the nature of things is mean,
(certainly as regards the cliffs, milk-thistles and finches)
and she goes angrily but with determination,
blindly but with angels, and as sins of the young shine in streams,
like hontish stars, and lovers
thrash in the wind, like Tess and her angel, and grieve as if
the skies can squint and glane at them both
& could even melt her down to the shadow of a ring,
shame-faced girl, in her best boots
who looks away from insane abbey walls, veiled, just loved
and lost again in the woods
And as singing her thresher's song she runs and runs again,
til the rains finally fill her
and a four-poster at home, with mistle-toe, can't still the winds,
slipping in through the cracks
and the figure of a finch, playing at his harp, awaits outside
and Tess's taken from her stone
7 comments:
Glorious writing, Conrad. It brings 'Tess' alive again with all its passion, sadness and energy.
I wonder what Hardy would make of it were he still alive. I often wonder what those wonderful writers of old would make of all our derivative stuff.
Who cares? This is wonderful and I thank you for it.
Thanks, Elisabeth!
She's my favourite literary heroine.I've been a Hardy reader for years.
I always write the way I feel.
Bravo!
Thanks, Gerry!
I'm glad you liked my Tess poem.
Conrad,
A real tour de force!
Thank you, Vassilis!
A privilege to talk to you here.
I need a little time to understand all... but i find it is great !!!
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